Talk:Clunky laptop: Difference between revisions

Revision as of 05:04, 11 January 2008

I've fixed typos and added wiki links, all without disturbing the prose. I've tried some reflow to see if that make it an easier read.

I'd really like to remove this bit: 'Linux, however cumbersome ' and add "as short as" to the Flash URL but I'm leaving it as is.

Adricnet 00:04, 11 January 2008 (EST)

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 == Style and flow ==
-I've fixed typos and added wiki links, all without disturbing the prose. I'm going to try some reflow in a bit to see if that make it an easier read.
+I've fixed typos and added wiki links, all without disturbing the prose. I've tried some reflow to see if that make it an easier read.
+I'd really like to remove this bit: 'Linux, ''however cumbersome'' ' and add
-[[User:Adricnet|Adricnet]] 23:57, 10 January 2008 (EST)
+"''as short as''" to the Flash URL but I'm leaving it as is.
+[[User:Adricnet|Adricnet]] 00:04, 11 January 2008 (EST)