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== Style and flow == |
== Style and flow == |
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I've fixed typos and added wiki links, all without disturbing the prose. I've tried some reflow to see if that |
I've fixed typos and added wiki links, all without disturbing the prose. I've tried some reflow to see if that makes it an easier read. |
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I'd really like to remove this bit: 'Linux, ''however cumbersome'' ' and add |
I'd really like to remove this bit: 'Linux, ''however cumbersome'' ' and add |
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Revision as of 05:05, 11 January 2008
Style and flow
I've fixed typos and added wiki links, all without disturbing the prose. I've tried some reflow to see if that makes it an easier read.
I'd really like to remove this bit: 'Linux, however cumbersome ' and add "as short as" to the Flash URL but I'm leaving it as is.
Adricnet 00:04, 11 January 2008 (EST)