OLPC:Webpage corrections needed: Difference between revisions

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Currently -> "XO laptop delivery dates depend upon when you donated to the Give One Get One program and where you live."
Currently -> "XO laptop delivery dates depend upon when you donated to the Give One Get One program and where you live."

Proposed -> "OLPC is working to get laptops out to all who donated. Thank you for your generosity and patience."
Proposed -> "OLPC is working to get laptops out to all who donated. Thank you for your generosity and patience."



Revision as of 03:19, 17 January 2008

Walter is working to fix factual errors and outdated information on non-wiki websites (primarily http://laptop.org and http://laptopgiving.org). Please list critically needed (read: will lead users into a dead end) edits here in as much detail as possible. This isn't the place to give suggestions on how to redesign/overhaul the entire website - try to keep it to fixes that can be made in 10 minutes or less so we can get things changed immediately.

Laptopgiving.org

http://laptopgiving.org/en/shipping-information.php

  • Mentions that "we are doing all that we can to ship as many XO laptops as possible by the December 24 holiday"
  • still lists Jan. 15 as the final firm "you should get it by then" date
  • no link to instructions (Kim's "if your order is still lost" escalation instructions - not sure if these are online in a place other than this forum post) in case your laptop hasn't arrived by the listed date.


http://laptopgiving.org/en/faq.php

I participated in Give One Get One. When will I receive my laptop?

Currently -> "XO laptop delivery dates depend upon when you donated to the Give One Get One program and where you live."

Proposed -> "OLPC is working to get laptops out to all who donated. Thank you for your generosity and patience."

Laptop.org