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all refrences to teachers are "her" you should try to stay as gender neutral as possible. |
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Revision as of 20:48, 15 October 2006
The difference in number of visits (CM1 2B1 x LV) may show that the ship is draws much more attention than the journey. Paradoxically, the journey may have infinite and interesting variations, whereas the ship remains more or less the same in all of them. Ptdrumm 23:22, 23 August 2006 (EDT)
Ugh sections please
Too many huge chunks of text, sections please. Organize your thoughts, use small paragraphs.
Be gender equal please
all refrences to teachers are "her" you should try to stay as gender neutral as possible.