Talk:Clunky laptop
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Style and flow
I've fixed typos and added wiki links, all without disturbing the prose. I've tried some reflow to see if that makes it an easier read.
I'd really like to remove this bit: 'Linux, however cumbersome ' and add "as short as" to the Flash URL but I'm leaving it as is.
Adricnet 00:04, 11 January 2008 (EST)
- Thanks for the edits. I'm not so "arrogant" as to not appreciate some good copy editing!! --Walter 02:19, 11 January 2008 (EST)
Rather than use pullout quotes, how about just indenting the response with a leading : ?--Walter 02:44, 11 January 2008 (EST)
- Oh, wow that looks much better! I'm noting that trick down. 'arrogant' lol.
Adricnet 03:33, 11 January 2008 (EST)